08. Laugh, because it's either laugh or cry
I've been running out of cynical thoughts
Something to manifest about
I'm stuck in this realm where everything is just the way it is
I'm waiting for someone to shake this realm I'm in
May I acknowledge your existence as such
Because pain has never felt this awakening
Acquiesced without ratification
Silence
Because no talk nor act
Nor even love
Could resurrect this
We dropped the key a damn long time ago
Laying back to back between a latched door
& this is only as close as it will get
With nothing more
& nothing less
About Me
- S.WING
- I met a stranger. Strangers are suppose to be intriguing. Indeed, he is. He taught me something rare, to write for the paper basket. I guess this is it, entries of paper basket. Raw feelings.
8 comments:
From what I have seen of your blog so far, this is definately your best piece. Probably because using verse forces a writer to be more selective with their word choice.
The representation of an estranged couple sitting on either side of the door is powerful. It deserves to be the subject of its own poem, where you can explore this imagery more fully.
stranger: well thanks (: I got burnt by my news writing teacher today... it's bad.
How to write such inspiring posts? I want too! I am feeling the way you ae but I cant! D: Please teach.
elfie: I guess you draw inspiration from within yourself, breathe slow, steady, ready, and write (:
Thanks! :D Inspiration centre is just here haah! Nah, kidding! cheer up still and when will you just accept me in facebook? haha
Thanks for accepting, S wing. (: Please be like your pen name.
Swinggg as carefree as you cann..
S wingg when will you start updating again? Miss your posts!
Interesting post but hope your thoughts are not as melancholic as its contents ya :)
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